Hi! My name is Melanie Troyer and I am a Mass Communications major with a concentration in Electronic Media. I am around media every day with music, TV, radio, computers, and having my phone. This picture portrays one of my hobbies which is volleyball. I play here for the school and have been playing since the 3rd grade.
One of my favorite movies is Remember the Titans and I am obsessed with the TV show "One Tree Hill" and other dramas such as "Friday Night Lights" and "The OC." I enjoy all types of genres of music from rock 'n roll, country, hip-hop, and oldies.
I am not too sure what I want to do when I graduate but I know I want to work with TV and radio. I am interested in making media because I enjoy videos and music and when I see certain things come together I get excited knowing in the future I will be able to make certain videos.
The photo is lovely Melanie but it does not show your connection to volleyball as you describe. You have a personal connection to the photo and volleyball because you know how they are connected. As a viewer, that connection is unknown. Always keep in mind that your audience is uninformed. They only know what you tell them and more importantly show them.
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